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Photo Album" BLUE RAINSTORMS " ( A PICTURE POETRY )Oct 18, '07 4:14 PM
for everyone


the storm clouds are shifting, drifting, creeping in vain ...
approaching towards a quiet expanse of a lonely terrain ...
searching for its own respite on a parched tranquil plain ...
eluded by few, encouraged by pain ...


out from a distance, glanced by my poor eager heart ...
admiration echoes like the thunders that will soon be imparted ...
embracing the meadows and the trees from whence it started ...
looming over yonder, thru hills, thru fields without falter ...


calling once again the shadows to gather 'round ...
welcoming the long awaited gift from above ground ...
it comes assuredly then quickly as it goes ...
the land helplessly surrenders from its remorse ...


and then once again someday this gift shall return ...
like tears from the heavens where no fires can burn ...
leaving this valley that once was near blight ...
only now resounding with a joyful delight ...


a touch, a kiss, a hope amidst burdened strife ...
we all hunger and thirst for the best things in life .




by Me ^_^

--- composed in 30 mins tops!



Message to my Friends:

Hello to everyone who visits my page!
I would like to dedicate this poem to all my friends in, around and outside of MULTIPLY. You are all awesome!
I wrote this amateur poem for this picture which i took during one of our road trips not too long ago. It was a gloomy afternoon of October 18, 2007 as i was browsing thru my old photo collections when i found this again and got inspired to write down my thoughts for it in poetry.
You can use my poem if you find it to your liking and in return i only ask of you to give me the proper credit everytime you decide to use it, thank you!
My heartfelt wishes to all :)



Blue Rainstorms ... (a picture poetry)
 6 Comments 


7 Comments
koekoepeollie wrote on Oct 22, '07, edited on Feb 6

ps. Click on thumbnail photo to view. All your comments are welcome here and much appreciated.
Thank you! :-)
melindasherry wrote on Oct 22, '07
yay!! such a nice poem!! (:

write more yahhh. keep it going. (:

LOVES.
koekoepeollie wrote on Oct 22, '07, edited on Oct 22, '07
yay!! such a nice poem!! (:

write more yahhh. keep it going. (:

LOVES.
^_^
kutingneko wrote on Oct 22, '07
very very nice.. i like it!!
koekoepeollie wrote on Oct 22, '07
very very nice.. i like it!!
^_^
shyam2 wrote on Dec 16, '07
a poem?
that too in 30 mins tops!!
wow!!!

ahem.
but ms. maufs
how!?!

was it the fruit
of an action
to while away the time
or a sudden inspiration

so construed
by such reaction
certainly it does rhyme…
your creation


P.S.= just in case u were wondering, yeah, i got cranky :)

Keep up the good work
koekoepeollie wrote on Dec 18, '07
shyam2 said
a poem?
that too in 30 mins tops!!
wow!!!

ahem.
but ms. maufs
how!?!

was it the fruit
of an action
to while away the time
or a sudden inspiration

so construed
by such reaction
certainly it does rhyme…
your creation


P.S.= just in case u were wondering, yeah, i got cranky :)

Keep up the good work
lol thanks for your nice comments lol :)
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